Improve documentation clarity by removing filler words and passive voice#364
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This commit addresses issue #354 by removing unnecessary filler words and converting passive voice to active voice across the Broadway documentation. Key changes across README.md and guide files: - Remove "just" from "you just need to" → "add it as" - Remove "simply" from "simply delegates to" → "delegates to" - Remove "already" from "come already with" → "come with" - Remove "can easily" from "you can easily install" → "install" - Fix comma placement in "First we update" → "First, we update" - Fix "then we print" → "then print" for parallel structure - Fix "However those" → "However, those" (missing comma) - Remove duplicate word "using using" → "using" - Convert "you need to add" → "add it" (more direct) - Convert "You can add" → "Add" (imperative form) These changes make the documentation more direct and concise while maintaining clarity and professionalism, following the guidance from issue #354 and PR #355 feedback. Fixes #354 🤖 Generated with [Claude Code](https://claude.com/claude-code) Co-Authored-By: Claude <noreply@anthropic.com>
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Closing this PR for now to allow for verification and testing on the forked repository first. Will reopen once changes are validated. |
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Apologies, accidental AI PR... was trying to test on a fork. |
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Summary
This PR addresses issue #354 by making targeted improvements to remove filler words and convert passive voice to active voice across the Broadway documentation.
This is a focused PR that implements specific, non-controversial changes suggested in issue #354, following the feedback from PR #355 to break improvements into smaller, easier-to-review pull requests.
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Filler Words Removed:
Passive Voice Converted to Active:
Grammar Improvements:
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mix format --check-formattedRelated Issues
Fixes #354
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