Update emmett-2018-rewriting-story-human.md

[Jeff-Emmett]

Added author responses to the editorial critiques of this article, and adjusted the formatting to more clearly denote the additions.

In the spirit of open & collaboratory publishing, I would request that this version either replace the current version, or be linked to prominently as an additional article in your series.

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[rufuspollock]

@Jeff-Emmett hi. Sorry for the time to see this - we have not been tracking this repo properly since we published the v1 of the guide back in 2022. I will now watch this thread and you can also reach out via hello [at] rufuspollock.com if i miss anything here.

First, I'm sorry that you are unhappy with the assessment here. I hope it was clear (i thought it was in the text) that I thought you had only positive aspirations (including many i shared) and were acting in intellectual good faith even I was skeptical of how you were suggesting they could be achieved.

As a path forward i suggest two things we could do (i suggest we can do both of them in parallel):

1. In the spirit of openness and open-minded, collaborative inquiry I would propose having a recorded dialog(s) where we explore this further until we reach mutual satisfaction and (hopefully) joint understanding -- at least of our core points of agreement and difference. My hope would be that this would be a positive example of joint sensemaking.

2. I'd be happy to go with the second option you request: i.e. link prominently to an article you put up with your responses.