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[77-777]

More spelling mistake corrections and changes to better suit the English page.

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[BLumia]

Beside the deepin branding spelling stuff, lgtm.

[BLumia]

deepin's branding guideline actually suggest use deepin (lowercase d) instead of Deepin when it was used standalone.