2024-http-vs-https

[evos96]

article and illustration added

[ShamanOxy]

External feedback:

negative aspect(s):

  It was not clear. 1/5
  The structure was confusing. 2/5
  I lost interest midway. 1/5
  I didn't understand the purpose. 1/5

positive aspect(s):

  The information was easy to understand. 4/10
  Good balance between technical depth and readability. 3/10
  The structure is clear and easy to follow. 3/10

did the drawing help to understand the meaning of the article?:
70 % Yes

factual errors or inaccuracies in the article:
" No"

additional comments:

  "Easy to read and you understand the information" ;
  "There's too much text in that small place. I think it's really messy.";
  "the structure of the text (no paragraphs, just one block of text) made it uninviting at first glance and made it harder to stay engaged.";
  "no relation of graphic to text."
  "It was also understandable."

[carinaschrenk]

Internal Feedback Round 1B 14.11

Thoughts

• The text needs better structure (indentation).
• The picture does not effectively convey the message.
• SSL/TLS are mentioned without context.
• Cryptography is referenced but not explained.

Ideas

[carinaschrenk]

Hello @evos96,
The deadline for revising the article from round 1 was November 21st, and since then, there have been reminders via email and in the classroom. Please upload the revised version as soon as possible so that we can have a good selection of articles to choose from at the end of the seminar.
Best, Carina

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[AndreVRibeiro]

HTTP vs HTTPS (Creative feedback - Miroslava Macejkova)

HTTP is the friendly but careless messenger who shouts messages openly around, allowing the hearer to overhear sensitive details.
HTTPS on the other hand, is the cautious messenger who locks messages in a secure chest before delivering them.
Ensuring no one but the intended recipient can access the contents.

Safe, Safer, HTTPS (Creative feedback - André Ribeiro)

Browsing with HTTP is like passing notes in class—anyone can read them, from your crush to the class troublemaker. Your name, address, credit card info? All up for grabs.
HTTPS swoops in to save the day. The “S” means Secure, encrypting your data so that even if someone intercepts it, all they’ll see is a scrambled mess.
So, next time you’re online, make sure to spot that “S” and the padlock.

[carinaschrenk]

Final Feedback Quality and Content Group

We have collected some feedback on the article and think the following changes would be appropriate:

1. The biggest issue currently is the illustration. Could you please provide a new illustration that enhances the text and is more engaging than the current one?
2. It would be nice to add the following important info: "HTTPS adds encryption, making online browsing safer. However, it’s important to stay alert for fake (spoofed) certificates that can compromise security. Always look for the padlock icon in the browser, check certificate details by clicking on it, and avoid sites that show browser warnings about security issues.”

Please apply the suggested changes and upload them until the 7th of January

[ashdriod]

Hi, this is the second delivery of the graphics, which currently include watermarks that will be removed after the delivery is approved on Fiverr. Small changes can be made until Tuesday, while larger changes will be included in the final order.

[liuchengray]

Edited text after proofreading(Testing TF):

While surfing the internet, you have certainly noticed the abbreviations HTTP and HTTPS at the beginning of websites. But do you know the difference between the two?

HTTP, or Hyper Text Transfer Protocol, is used to transfer information between your browser and a web server. However, this communication is not secure, as the messages sent are not encrypted. This means that sensitive information, such as your name, address, or credit card details, could be accessed by attackers and used for harmful purposes.

To address this problem, most websites now use HTTPS. The "S" stands for Secure, which means the information exchanged is encrypted. This ensures that even if someone tries to access the data, they won’t be able to understand it. HTTPS provides an additional layer of security, allowing us to browse the internet with greater safety and confidence.

[lauraengist]

Hi, this is the second delivery of the graphics, which currently include watermarks that will be removed after the delivery is approved on Fiverr. Small changes can be made until Tuesday, while larger changes will be included in the final order.

This is not my article, but I think there is an error in the graphic. On the right side it should also say "https" in the url field on top.