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Creative Rewrite Result of Group 1 (Salman, Fabian, Philippe, Arita and Carina)My data isn’t organized? It doesn’t matter! (Version A Philippe)In the data world, sometimes chaos reigns—and that's okay! My data isn’t organized? What does it matter? (Version B Carina)Have you ever re-organized your wardrobe? Companies have to manage big amounts of data. So next time you put shirts in your wardrobe, remember that a little effort can go a long way in keeping your closet organized. |
Final Feedback from the Content and Quality Team
Please revise the article by the 31st, since the final versions should be available then, as decided in the seminar. |
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Hello Subahani, the revision of the image made it unrenderable for Github. Please make sure that the image you upload can be rendered by Github. Secondly you did not revise the text yet. Best, |
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Hi @subahini, I saw that you revised the article. However, it did not change much from the old version, and the change does not address the feedback that was previously given. I look forward to hearing your thoughts. Best, |
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I appreciate the effort that went into this picture! While it’s lovely, I feel it could be even better if it were a bit closer to the original version. Perhaps aligning it more with the original's style or elements might capture the intended essence more effectively. What do you think? |
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Edited text after proofreading(Testing TF): One day, the data lake and the data warehouse went to a party together. The data lake burst through the door, yelling, "Let’s get messy! Raw data, messy formats—dump it all on me!" It happily took in anything and everything: leftovers, drinks, and even random party decorations. The data warehouse strolled in calmly, adjusting its tie, and said, "I’m here to keep things in order. Snacks in labeled trays, drinks sorted by type—no chaos on my watch." By the end of the night, the data lake was overflowing with random junk, barely able to keep track of what was where. Meanwhile, the data warehouse sat neatly in the corner, muttering, "This is why I prefer structure," as people came to it for anything they actually needed to find.In computer science, the data lake represents unstructured, raw data storage, while the data warehouse epitomizes structured, organized data optimized for analysis and retrieval. |

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